Thursday, August 8, 2013

Teaser Scene from "Dauntless" excerpt of Part Two, Chapter Six

Hey, Erin here.  I know, I haven't posted in awhile.  However, I've been hard at work writing, so that makes up for it, right?  I tend to think so.  To coax you into forgiving me for my lengthy absence, I thought I'd give you a taste of my newest novel in progress, "Dauntless."  This one likely won't be published until early 2014, but I'd love to hear what you have to say about this scene which, yes, I plucked out of the middle of the story.  But I love it, so I thought I'd reveal it for you.  This is from Part Two, Chapter Six entitled "Get Hot! Get Hot!"  Enjoy!


                          Powerful and resonant horns boomed throughout the club, trumpets and trombones belting out an upbeat swing tune, as a wonderfully sensuous, dark skinned gal sang the melody in a deep, heavenly voice.  Smoke clogged up most of the joint, cloaking the patrons in a concealing fog, allowing each group, or each couple, their own little intimate piece of the dance floor.  Smoking a cigarette hanging off the end of a long, elegant, tortoise shell holder that was all the rage with the high class dolls, Charlotte's lazy eyes met Lillie’s pale blues through the mist.  Pressing her lips together, she stared, and Lillie squirmed.
                    “You really carry a torch for him, don’t you?” Lillie asked softly.  She held a glass in her left hand absently, her fingers forgetting to hold it upright.  The glare she had thrown at Charlotte was now letting up as she saw the pleading in her eyes.  “You really, really like him?”
                    “Yes, I really do.”  Charlotte’s feet tapped the floor briskly as she rubbed up upraised arm.  “I know that you had your eye on him…”
                   Sighing, Lillie uncrossed her arms, and placed a hand tenderly on Charlotte’s shoulder.  Noticing Charlotte’s now downcast eyes, she leaned in and said nicely, “Then don’t worry about it.  Have fun with him.  I’m serious, you deserve to have a little bit of fun, Char.”
                    Looking up again, her eyes big and about to run over with tears, she smiled and grabbed Lillie’s hand.  “Do you mean it?”
                    “Of course!  We’ve been friends for how long now?  I would never let a man come between us!”
                    Pulling the slender cigarette holder away from her lips, she wrapped her friend in an embrace without hesitation.  After the shock wore off, Lillie lifted her hands and squeezed her friend, a wry smile cracking her expression.  As Charlotte pulled back, she nimbly planted a kiss on her friend’s cheek.  Lillie squealed in surprise.
                    “Char!  What an indecent girl you are!”  Laughing loudly, she dabbed at the spot on her cheek where the kiss had landed.  “Oh, Charlotte!  There must be a bright red pair of lips there now.”
                    Giggling, Charlotte pulled out a handkerchief and delicately wiped away the red print.  Her dark brown eyes lifted to meet Lillie’s again, and the sparkle she found there made her realize everything was okay.  “I’m sorry, I couldn’t resist!” she twittered innocently.  As she leaned back, replacing her kerchief back into her handbag, her eyes dulled and her expression hardened.  “You do know how much I love Teddy…” she whispered.
                    “Of course, darling.”
                    “…But you also know how much he controls me and holds me back and yells at me…”
                    “He sure does.”
                    “So… I’m just having a little fun.”
                    “You deserve it… don’t feel guilty.”
                    “You’re a good friend.”
                    “Now!”  Lillie cried cheerfully as she raised her glass to her mouth.  Tilting it all the way back, she emptied it in one swig.  “We must refill our glasses, and then we must become floorflushers!”
                    Exclaiming, “Yes!” Charlotte reached to the small table on which she leaned, retrieved her wine glass, emptied it, and linking arms with Lillie, they pranced away towards the barkeep.  Sweeping their hems under them as they sat, each woman relaxed on a barstool, bowing into towards each other, laughing over a joke only the two of them would understand.  “Two whiskey-rocks and two dry martinis, if you please,” Charlotte cooed, and twisted back towards Lillie hastily.
                    “Tell me everything,” Lillie chirped, burning with curiosity.  “Is he a good kisser?”
                    Charlotte raised an eyebrow slyly.  “The best!”  The two burst into a wail of laughter, which was cut short by, “So passionate!  Couldn’t you just tell he’d be that way?”
                    “The other night when I had my eyes on him, he’d look at me with this unblinking stare so intensely…” Lillie feigned a swoon and the two laughed again.  “Something deep in his eyes… And I could never tell what color they were.  Green?  Blue?  Grey?”
                    “So intense!” Charlotte agreed.  Two shots of whiskey were slammed down in front of them.  Each woman lifted her own into the air.  “To best friends!”
                    “Best friends!” Lillie cheered back, and each tipped their drink back fiercely.  They simultaneously hammered the short, dense glasses on the bar top, letting them run into each other with a clink!  “Oh, Char, I gotta level with you…”
                    “What?”
                    “Teddy telephoned my house this morning.”
                    “Oh!  God… What did he say?”
                    “He wanted to know where you were last night, since you never turned up.”
                    “And?”
                    “I told him you had stayed over at my place, and that seemed to cool him off.”
                    Touching her fingers to her cheek, she muttered, “Oh, my word…”
                    “I just thought you should know what I said, just in case…”
                    “I got it.”  Averting her eyes momentarily, she swallowed and composed herself.  Lifting the newly arrived martini, she said, her voice shaking, “Thank you, Lil.  You saved me.”
                    “Don’t mention it.”  Smiling again, she said, pleading, “Don’t worry about it, okay?  We’ve got an edge started.  I think we need to get zozzled tonight.”
                    “I think you’re…” Adjusting the skirt below her, Charlotte swiveled in her seat, her eyes sweeping across the far end of the bar.  She stopped cold.
                    “What, Char?  You think I’m what?”  Following her friend’s gaze, she saw a man sitting at the far end of the bar, holding a drink in his hand nonchalantly, his hat tipped to the side at that just-right angle, blanketed in the poorly lit fringe of the room.  That foxy smile adorned his face, and he winked at her.  Without answering her friend’s inquiry, she almost threw her drink back on the bar, bounded off of her perch on the barstool, and ran towards him.  She too was cloaked in darkness as she wrapped him in a warm embrace, slowly pressing her lips to his.
                    “Harry…”
                    “What, you didn’t think I’d show up?”

Excerpt from "Dauntless" Copyright © 2013 by Erin M. Truesdale

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